Saturday, August 23, 2008

Grow grow

Grow in the seeds
the grow is seeded
as the seed comes.

Girl in the grow
the girl is gone in the seeds
as the seeds grow.

Watering the girl
has grown the girl
now she goes to be in the water.


Anonymous shermandkathy said...

Elva it was truly wonderful to reconnect after all that has gone by over these many years. Kathy and I kept repeating to each other that, it seems like only yesterday since we viewed one another and spoken to each other. Your children are great, your sister and family are too, and your Mom has not changed a bit.
We love you all,
Sherman& Kathy

8/24/08, 12:30 AM  
Blogger BBC said...

Good morning, noticed your comment on my blog. New Mexico hey, been there, done that. Well, been everywhere. Not everywhere, but 49 states and half of Canada. Now I'm a nester.

Some nice places there though, if you stay with small places. Interesting poem, yes, grow, learn. Not easy on this planet where they raise you teaching you so much stupid stuff though.

Happy paths, may you travel and experience many of them. If one doesn't feel right back out and try another.

8/24/08, 12:57 AM  
Blogger MAN IN PAINTING said...

very good..
growing is the challenge..
learning and unlearning are the keys to the secret of growing..

8/24/08, 5:00 AM  
Blogger meetu said...

elva after a long time i have come accross a very unique style of expression in your poetry . i love it ..crisp yet powerful.

8/24/08, 9:44 AM  
Blogger American Hill BIlly said...


I noticed your comment on my blog, and am appreciative. Where'd you see my blog?

On another note I like your blog; poetry adds to people's ability to maintain/build Critical Thinking Skills!

I love Your Brown Bear Photo. I have family in Northwest that live among the Grizzly, Wolves, and Black Bear. It's to late this season, but next summer if you like, then I can give you directions on a Spirit Man that has made friends with all the bears of the area. You really can feed them, and spend time with bears; I gained spiritual insight doing it. I have a picture of my bro' feeding them on my site; a few posts down.

United In Peace And Freedom

8/24/08, 10:38 AM  
Blogger foam said...

staying afloat can be tricky at times..
but if the growing was good..
then she will be strong in the water.

8/24/08, 12:44 PM  
Blogger human being said...

very beautiful...
loved the way we turn and turn in this cycle of growth... and aren't we on this planet just to grow?

we grow to grow...

8/24/08, 1:25 PM  
Blogger boneman said...

OK, it almost seems like a riddle...
So, I'll venture to guess.

A water lilly?

8/24/08, 2:08 PM  
Blogger Hopper said...

I love the way that you craft words... the sonics... the layers of meaning... thank you for sharing your work...

8/24/08, 6:41 PM  
Blogger aria said...

an eternal cycle..
interesting style ..

8/26/08, 6:52 AM  
Blogger goatman said...

Life force is what I see. Developing and becoming one.
Much to look at here, askance.

8/26/08, 10:04 AM  
Blogger Echo said...

Thank you all for the kind comments.

boneman, a water lilly of a real girl actually. But it does make a good riddle.

I don't know any way to look at things other than askance.

8/26/08, 8:14 PM  
Blogger Ricardo said...

Thanks for coming by and commenting. I figured this must have been a short and very nice piece about a girl coming of age.

8/28/08, 2:13 PM  
Blogger dr.alistair said...

thanks for your comment at hypgnosys......and your way with words.

a priceless gift of smiles.


8/29/08, 7:41 AM  

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